Showing posts with label Persuasive Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Persuasive Writing. Show all posts

Teachers should wear a school uniform

Teachers get to wear mufti and why don’t we?
Firstly, they are like us they work here and so do we. We should all wear a school uniform with pride and care about our school.
Secondly, it is not fair when teachers get to wear mufti and we don’t.  Why don’t we all wear the same school uniform because when we all wear different clothes we look like we come from a different school.
Lastly, teachers are rude wearing no uniform.  Why are we wearing different clothes than them.  It’s not fair they have a choice and we don’t.

Keep Homework!

Girls and Boys I think homework should not be banned because it helps us learn.
Firstly, it will improve our learning and help us get good jobs.
Secondly, it is not a waste of time because if you want to play at a friends house you can and you can do homework afterwards.
Thirdly, it does not kill trees to make paper.  They plant a seed for every tree they cut down.
Lastly, the teacher does not give us homework every day so we have heaps of time to play with your friends.  Reading everyday at home is fun.

Homework should be banned!

Firstly, homework kills trees.  It uses too much paper or uses electricity because it could get emailed to you and then you have to print it. 
Secondly, it’s really hard and tiring because some of it we don’t really understand.  
Thirdly, kids are not as fit as they should be because they sit at home doing homework.  Children should be playing outside with their friends. 
In conclusion homework just sucks because it stops kids having fun and doing sport.

Homework

I think homework should be banned because it is unhealthy.  Children should be at sports practice. They have been working hard all day.  Come on give us a break!  It makes us tired, but when we get home we are all ready tired enough.   It makes your parents stressed.  We are all stressed out and we really need to ban home work. It drives us kids up the walls and its just a waist of paper and ink. Sometimes children don’t even do homework.  It uses up all our spare time when we could be helping around the house or doing our chores.   

I think homework should be banned!

Point 1
Should we have homework?
We don't think so, don't we have the right to make our own decisions.  Yes we do!  Homework is just more school work right?  Kids slave away doing schoolwork for 30 hours a week!  And what do they come home to on Friday?  Two hours of homework.

Point 2
Does homework come from trees?
Yes, it does as paper comes from trees!  Hey people, we are not smashing CO2.  Each tree cut down downgrades our CO2 defence levels.  Homework kills trees.

Point 3
Do we get enough fresh air?
No, we don't!   We are locked inside doing homework and not getting enough fresh air.  Children should be outside playing.

In conculsion I think homework should be inilated completely, you already know all of your homework.

Homework should be banned!



Some homework is too much for children in primary schools. Teachers give too much to children under the age of 13 years.
Firstly, children get sleepy after school and just want to sit down.
Secondly, parents get stressed because their children keep coming up to them and asking what they have to do.
Thirdly, children sometimes have sport or dance practice and don’t have time to do their homework.  Being stuck in a room for 1 hour is not good for health 
Lastly, it wastes paper and kills trees.  We think homework should be banned!   

Home work hours

Lady's and gentlemen welcome to the jury.  Homework has brought us one thing...stress.

Homework should be banned.  Firstly, lots of kids don't have the time to do home work because of things like soccer or swimming.

Secondly, it stresses us and our parents out when we don't know what it means.

Finally, we need the time to excise and get some fresh air because sitting around all day for two hours
trying to figure what we have to do is not healthy.

In conclusion I think home work should be banned.

I rest my case, thank you for your time.

Homework should be banned

Why should we do homework? We believe that it should be banned. Heaps of students do too much homework.
Firstly, children should be outside playing sport. They shouldn’t be inside on a hot sunny day doing this extremely difficult 20 page essay on something you haven’t even covered enough in class.  Plus, we have a right to leisure and play.
Secondly, we sometimes get the things we already know because the teacher thinks we’ve forgotten it.  Plus, it makes our brain overload, we need a rest.
Thirdly, kids have other things to do, like sport practice, swimming and plans with family/friends.  Like we said kids have better things to do on their mind.
Our argument shows that homework should be banned from every school. 

The argument for Homework

The Position
Boys and girls I believe homework should not be banned because it gets us smart and gives us good work habits. 
Firstly It will improve our learning.  If we don’t do our homework we won’t get good jobs and good money.
Secondly, it does not waist our time because you can chose when you do it.  For example if you have sports training you can do it after that, if you go to one of your friend’s house you can do it after tea, so it does not take up our free time. 
Thirdly, our parents do not get stressed because they should not be doing your home work for you.  The teacher needs to make sure the homework activities can be done by the class.
Fourthly, you don’t have to do it all at once.  You might only do a little bit for ten minutes and another day for fifteen minutes.  
Fifthly, it does kill trees, but there are seeds to plant more trees.  There are lots of trees in the world. Plus there are people that do that for their jobs and they don’t want to stop working.  The teacher can e-mail you your homework.
Lastly, your teacher should not give you homework every day, because that would be too much.  

Ban homework

Homework should be banned.
Homework should be banned because all kids want to do after school is to relax. We have spent all day at school working hard.                                   
If there is this much homework it would be just five days nonstop.  If there is homework kids will never get to do what kids do. We feel homework is boring and we should be doing what we like. 

Goldilocks is Innocent!


Our darling Goldilocks should never be locked up ladies and gentlemen. She is innocent of the crimes she did not commit.

Firstly, she did not ignore the sign. How would a seven year old be able to read such small and strange language, plus the sign was too high for her to see.

Secondly, she thought she was invited for breakfast, and the Three Bears were hiding to give her a suprise. Goldilocks also thought that the bears were giving her a porridge taste test. Goldilocks even got an invitation two days before inviting her for breakfast (see exhibit 1). 


Thirdly, Goldilocks was so tired after the walk in the forest she had to have a rest. Fortunately the chair was so weak that when she sat down it broke! Not to mention that Baby bear wiggled in it a lot, and it was going to break any time soon.

After wondering where the Three Bears were Goldilocks went upstairs. She was so tired after staying up late to watch telethon that when she found the right bed, and she was going o take her shoes off, she fell asleep before she could. The reason why her shoes were muddy was because she had been walking in the forest.


Lastly, Goldilocks is an innocent young girls who has been framed by the Three Bears. You must think twice before putting her in jail.


Goldilocks is Guilty


Goldilocks is a small terror and she must be punished.

Firstly, Goldilocks ignored the sign "NO TRESPASSING INTO THE FOREST.' One of our correspondents was picking flowers when she saw Goldilocks with a devious look. The sign was being monitored by video cameras and this is what we picked up.

"NO TRESPASSING...hmm...I'm Goldilocks. It doesn't matter!"

Plus, our correspondent found footprints of Goldilocks, one of a kind shoes, all the way to the Three Bear's house.

Secondly, Goldilocks was breaking and entering into the bear's house. A crowbar with Goldilocks' fingerprints was found at the scene.

Thirdly, Goldilocks vandalised most of the Three Bear’s property. The priceless antique rocking chair was found broken at the bear’s house with Papa bear's sledgehammer stuck into a bit of the chair. She also broke Mama bear's bed. Mud and grass was found right around a spring sticking out of the bed.

My forth argument is that Goldilocks carelessly stole Baby bear's mini cart and ran over several people.  The mini cart was found outside Goldilocks’ house. Plus ten trees were found on the ground with skid marks on them.

Ladies and Gentlemen of the jury, all these crimes are against the law.  Join the fight to take down this monster.  Thank you for your support.   
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